Double page spread: Final Draft

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Focus Group Response

'The article should include a box-out, telling the audience where the artist got her clothes from or some other more personal information.'

'The pull quote should be in a different font, or the smaller than the title, so it doesnt draw the attention away'

'I like it, it looks really modern and very indie'

'The two pictures of the artist should really correspond'

'I like that there is a lot of text'

'I really like the font used, although its the same as the masthead it really suits'

'The fact that the artist is sitting on the pullquote looks really good and makes her seem more involved'