Option One for a masthead:
'I just live to the fullest'
+ It makes the artist seem inspiration
+ It makes the artist seem more positive
+ It gives the article a more personal edge
+ It emphasises the normality of the artist
+ It is intriguing
- It may seem at tad too cliche
- It doesn't clearly show the intent of the article
Option Two for a masthead:
'I hate being famous'
+ It makes the artist seem more down-to-earth
+ It is intriguing
+ It gives the reader a chance to feel fame; which is appealing
+ It is unconventional
+ It makes the article communicate with the reader on a more personal level
- The reader may reject the artists ungratefulness
- It makes the artist seem more negative
- It doesn't clearly show the intent of the article
Option Three for a masthead:
'My life is a cliched dream'
+ It is intriguing
+ It is unconventional
+ It makes the artist seem more real
+ It makes the article seem more personal
+ It gives the article a theme
+ It shows the audience what the article is about
+ It portrays the artist in a realistic, positive way
- It may not be clear enough for some to understand
- It may not be exciting enough
My Final choice of masthead: 'My Life is a chiched dream'
Brief for my standfirst
It is important for my stand first to not be too long: it should be at most 2 sentences. It should summarise the whole of the article, highlighting the main features.
Option One:
[Artists name] is bringing back the original Alternative-Rock underground style with her new album: [album name]. But what can we expect from her next? [Artists name] catches us up!
+ It shows the genre, the intent of the article
+ It highlights the artist as an individual
+ The rhetorical question makes it seem more personal
+ The use of the artists name at the opening is appealing
+ The use of the exclamation mark at the end makes it seem more exciting
+ The last sentence makes it seem more down to earth
+ Its intriguing
+ Its clear
Option Two:
When her single topped the charts at the start of 2012, we wasn't sure what else to expect. But, with her album coming out, we're no longer naive of her tremendous fate.
+ Makes the artist seem more known
+ Makes the artist seem more down to earth
+ Makes the audience feel more stylish being her fan
+ It creates curiosity
Option Three:
Screaming fans, expectant paparazzi; it may seem like a cliched dream, but, what has truly become of [artists name] stirred reality?
+ It plays with the masthead
+ Its simple and short
+ The rhetorical question makes the audience feel involved
+ It creates curiosity
+ It sits well on the tongue
My final choice: Option One
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