Creative stage: First and Second draft Double page spread Audience Feedback

Audience Feedback:

"I like the layout and the model as if sitting on the text. Use of colours go well together."

"I like how the model is sitting on the pull quote."

"I really like the layout of the images on the page. And, the grey gradient background"

"I like the big cover line, of the double page feature as well as the pull quotes"

"Try adding your masthead of 'Indie-pendence' as welll as a page number to make it look more like a magazine article and not just an article."

"I really like the font, its brilliant."

"I'm not sure I like the box in the corner, I think the writing looks like it doesn't fit almost."

"The lighting doesn't fully match on the two images of the artists"

"The writing could be smaller, and there could be more content, asking more personal questions"

"Try make the pull quote a bit smaller, to make the artists name stand out more."

"The pull quote in red could be bigger."